This guy is an author? He needs to learn correct English and and sentence structure. Some of his "sentences" make no sense at all.

I think this is what happens when you get a "know-it-all". Maybe sentence structure, what does that have to do with anything going on in the real world? Is it a language barrier? Do other country really give a shit about our sentence structure- Iraq, Afghanistan, Africa...

Do you think sentence structure would make a difference in modern day slavery, women and child abuse, injustices...

Instead of helping, all they do is criticize. Speaking on grammatical blunders, who cares as long as the message is loud and clear. Do you know how many people were wealthy before they learn to read and write,

Then after learning to read and write, did we do ourselves more harm than good. Is sentence structure just one more means by which the educated is pitted against the uneducated??? Art

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May 23, 2012
Guilt and inadequacies
by: You here

Guilt ridden, where does it stop? I like to take problems and use them as opportunities. Rather than talk about it, I enjoy doing something to resolve them.

And this problem as to do with guilty feelings. Is that why Americans didn't want to educate black people? Then when they finally decided to educate us, we embraced it. and as usual, we do better at their shit than we do our own. Now, that brings on the next problem.

Why do people want you to feel guilty for their own inadequacies? Instead of helping, they would prefer to tear down? Is there any real purpose to sentence stucture. Let just say, we spoke just like our masters wanted us to, would we be accepted? Why not, are they feeling guilty for their own inadequacies??

Is it sentence structure or the all-mighty dollar?

May 23, 2012
Sentence structure
by: Artie here

Some people really know how to get your attention or using good sentence structure pissing you off?

I took a course in Japanese History and thank God my instructor chose to help me rather than flunk me. Because of that, today I know a little bit of Japanese History.

Now, I also took courses in American History, 1, 2 and 3; and now I don't know a damn thing about American History and the little I do know is so distorted I wish I didn't know it. What does slavery mean to you? Indian wars, Jim Crow, so just what did Americans do in their past time?

Get understanding, how can you get that without trying? Then, what are you trying are you trying the wrong or right thing?

There are people who complain about my “sentence structure”, so I figured I would write something very nice for them.

How can Chinese people come to the United States and succeed in business? That’s why our communities are “failing now”. Now, you are critiquing my sentence structure, but what about our communities, neighborhoods, people… Do you think better sentence structure would help illuminate any of these problems?

I know plenty of people with great sentence structure, but they ain’t worth their own weight in salt. They would be more like the typical American today. Why would you want to be typical?

I look at high prices of food, gas, clothing….do you think they care about your sentence structure? Do you really think your enemy cares about how well they’ve taught you to be stupid?

You know people don’t hear my message, but they believe in the likes of cnn, abc, nbc, cbs… is it because of sentence structure? You know most of us complain about Black Men being in jail, but I would have to encounter a “shit head” who will not read and try to understand.

So rather than be insulted or made to feel inadequate, less than... I will take sentence structure as a compliment. I am where I am supposed to be and not cloned by my enemy.

What about your suntan?

your inner voice, what is the sentence structure, in what language does it speak? Does it build up or tear down, is it inspiring or humiliating? You get what you give.

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